Write Drunk, Edit Sober

June 15th, 2010 by bakerkline

In anticipation of the paperback release of my latest novel, Bird in Hand, my friend Gretchen Rubin invited me to answer some questions about happiness for her wonderful blog, The Happiness Project.  One of her questions is, "Is there a happiness mantra or motto you've found very helpful?" I do have one -- which I'll write about for Gretchen (and link to here!) in a few days -- but I love the answer to this question given by Larry Smith, creator of the brilliant Six-Word Memoir Project ("Fall down. Get up. Repeat process."):

"My motto for writing (which is a big part of my daily existence and own happiness), one that I think applies to life as well: “Write drunk, edit sober.” Not that you should actually be drunk (the inebriated writer is a silly, antiquated idea, among other things), but that you should just get the words down whether you’re writing a letter, a report for work, or the story of your life, in six words or 60,000. Put the words down, don’t obsess over them, just effusively spill them down onto the page. Then step away—for an hour, a day, a week, whatever you need. And then edit. Edit like crazy. Be hard on words and yourself and make it better. And when you think you’re finished, edit it one more time."

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  • http://surgebin.blogspot.com Bernard S. Jansen

    This is a lesson that must be relearnt many times. Over time, it's easy to convince yourself that it would be more efficient, or more "advanced", to write "final draft" material first time.

    Also, I think the inebriated writer idea is not only silly but dangerous. If you start to believe you need a particular substance to be creative, then it's easy to get in trouble as you try to get more creative.

    PS: Does the picture show Hemingway writing, or editing, or just posing?

  • http://www.suzanneanderson.net/ Suzanne

    Oh this is so true!! Both with regards to alcohol and to the need to simply allow yourself to write that first draft without a censor.

    Love Hemingway, am currently reading Islands in the Stream.

  • http://surgebin.blogspot.com Bernard S. Jansen

    Thinking further about this, I was reminded of this scene in the movie "Finding Forrester", which expresses the same thing, though differently:

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dQFgKIVCLbI

  • http://www.christinabakerkline.com bakerkline

    And Sean Connery even looks like Hemingway!

    I was at an artists' colony several weeks ago and had to get back into my novel again quickly (because I only had a few days), after an absence of some time. I found this advice liberating, and thought of it every time I sat down to write.

    I think Hemingway is writing in this picture (not just posing - or at least that's what I choose to think!).

  • http://ladymindful.blogspot.com/ Christie Abraham

    I couldn't agree more. If you think too much you will be paralyzed and write nothing. Now I am writing so many of my thoughts down and expanding on them as time permits.

    I am currently using autonomy to put my short stories into a book format. It's rather exciting. But everyone on that site is clamoring for you to read their projects. Who would have that time?

  • Carol Craley

    I prefer to think of the "drunk" as full to overflowing with ideas and possibilities. I agree that the first write needs to be from the heart and uncensored. I get the main ideas and direction on paper, as well as the words and phrases that give me the essence of the piece. I put it away and let the seeds of that framework grow and expand. By the time I return, it is ready to be developed. Finally I come back to edit, and edit, and edit.
    For me, I think it is "Write Drunk, Cultivate in a Glow, Edit Sober."

  • http://6512andgrowing.wordpress.com 6512 and growing

    I love this little motto.
    Thanks for putting it into words so well.

  • http://memoryandmirrors.blogspot.com/ Amalia Pistilli Conrad

    Yes, something similar was articulated by Dorothea Brande when she spoke of the near-schizophrenia that must be cultivated by the writer—the loose, possessed, totally given-over-to-the-writing mind when writing a first draft, and the cold, analytical and critical mind when editing and revising later on...

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